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(2024·辽宁沈阳育才中学模拟)About a month ago，I was walking alone on the beach in the evening.I have already finished my homework，and I wanted to relax.Suddenly，I saw two children stand on the beach.They seem to have found something made of metal，which was big and reddishbrown.When I took a look at it，I knew immediate that it was an old bomb！I told them to move away the bomb.Fortunately，I had a mobile phone around with me，so I called the police and told them that had been found.About 15 minutes late，the police arrived.I was praised for it but then I went home.The next day，I heard that the police had blown the bomb up.It had been on the sand for over 60 years!
答案：
About a month ago，I was walking alone on the beach in the evening.I
already finished my homework，and I wanted to relax.Suddenly，I saw two children
on the beach.They
to have found something made of metal，which was big and reddishbrown.When I took a look at it，I knew
that it was an old bomb！I told them to move / the bomb.Fortunately，I had a mobile phone
with m e，so I called the police and told them
had been found.About 15 minutes ，the police arrived.I was praised for it
then I went home.The next day，I heard that the police had blown the bomb up.It had been
the sand for over 60 years!
B
(2024·昆明质量检测二)I was asked to be a student teacher last week.My China teacher required me to give a lesson in my class.It was a first time that I had stood before class.I was thankful for her，because I had dreamed to be a teacher all the time.Considered that the class wouldn’t listen to me，I felt so nervous that I could fall asleep the night before.On the morning to give the lesson，I found it heavy to move my foot.At first，I can hardly speak fluently.Otherwise，I found myself much more relaxed gradually，because my classmates looked at me encouragingly.Finally，I finished the lesson smooth.I will remember my this experience forever.
答案：
I was asked to be a student teacher last week.My
teacher required me to give a lesson in my class.It was
first time that I had stood before class.I was thankful
her，because I had dreamed to be a teacher all the time. that the class wouldn’t listen to me，I felt so nervous that I / fall asleep the night before.On the morning to give the lesson，I found it heavy to move my .At first，I
hardly speak fluently.，I found myself much more relaxed gradually，because my classmates looked at me encouragingly.Finally，I finished the lesson .I will remember
this/my
experience forever.
C
中华资源库(2024·贵州七校联考)
Dear Li Ping，
How time flies！It is two months that I left China and came to London.
As you know it，London is the capital of Britain，which is on the bank of River Thames.It’s a big city with a population of about 7 millions.It’s also a very busy place.People here are usually friendly and helpfully，but they are often in hurry.What have impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing.Now I understand why the English people always talked about the weather.London has many famous places of interests for people to visit.I have just gone to British Museum and Hyde Park recently.
How are things going with yourself？I miss you and our friends very much.I hope I can hear from you as often as I can.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Wang Lin
答案：
Dear Li Ping，
How time flies！It is two months
I left China and came to London.
As you know ，London is the capital of Britain，which is on the bank of River Thames.It’s a big city with a population of about 7 .It’s also a very busy place.People here are usually friendly and ，but they are often in
hurry.What
impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing.Now I understand why the English people always
about the weather.London has many famous places of
for people to visit.I have just
to British Museum and Hyde Park recently.
How are things going with ？I miss you and our friends very much.I hope I can hear from you as often as I can.
Best wishes!
Yours，
来源：ziyuanku.comWang Lin
D
(2024·四川绵阳中学模拟)
Dear Linda，
I’m so exciting and happy to hear that you’re coming to China.Since your trip is scheduled for the middle of July，time is not a problem for me because of I will be having my summer vacation at that time.
I’ve been very busy recently，for I’ve been preparing for coming exam，which is vitally for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest intend for high school students all over the province and I win the first prize.I’ve always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in Englishspeaking countries like your to practise and improve my English.However，I also want to make friend with people from other countries.
ziyuanku.comI am looking forward to see you.
Yours，
Dai Hong
答案：
Dear Linda，
I’m so
and happy to hear that you’re coming to China.Since your trip is scheduled for the middle of July，time is not a problem for me because
I will be having my summer vacation at that time.
I’ve been very busy recently，for I’ve been preparing for
coming exam，which is
for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest
for high school students all over the province and I
the first prize.I’ve always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in Englishspeaking countries like
to practise and improve my English.，I also want to make
with people from other countries.
I am looking forward to
you.
Yours，
Dai Hong
E
(2024·甘肃高三诊断)Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road.Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion.
Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient.Beside， it helps improve the image of our city.But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution.How should we pull it down？The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city.We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.
So far there had been no conclusion over the matter.
答案：
Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along
road.Whether the temple should
pulled down
caused a heated discussion.
Some agree that we should pull it down to
out the construction project because it can solve some traffic
and make our life convenient.，it helps improve the image of our city.But the people who are
the idea believe that we can have another
solution. should we pull it down？The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city.We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.
来源：ziyuanku.comSo far there
been no conclusion over the matter.
F
(2024·齐鲁名校高三第一次联考)My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team.We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.Also，the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从) .Each player must obey a captain，which is the leader of the team.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
答案：
My favourite sport is football.I
a member of our school football team.We practise
three times every week and often watch football
on TV together. football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also
us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.Also，the sport teaches us the
of obedience (服从) .Each player must obey
captain， is the leader of the team.And
must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
G
(2024·吉林长春高三联考)
Dear Tim，
I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and I’ll graduate this summer.I’m eighteen year old.
There is three people in my family and I’m the only one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together.
I’m cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past，I collected in a lot of stamps，which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about myself，your family and daily school.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Tim，
I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and I’ll graduate this summer.I’m eighteen
old.
There
three people in my family and I’m the only one child， is very common in Chinese families.My father
in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We
a happy life together.
I’m
cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have
hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past，I collected
a lot of stamps，which are very
now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about ，your family and daily school.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
H
ziyuanku.com(2024·辽宁高中联考)Last summer I went to Xi’an with my parents.We had visited many places of interest as the temperature was over 38℃.Finally we climbed Mount Hua.It is very high and steep.We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six hour to get to the summit.How beautiful scenery it was！You could see many mountains and rivers in distance.In the
night we
stayed in a cave hotel.I couldn’t go to asleep because the wind was blowing heavily.I am afraid the mountain would break down.The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise from the east.The sun was very big and red.How exciting we were!
答案：
Last summer I went to Xi’an with my parents.We
visited many places of interest
the temperature was over 38℃.Finally we climbed Mount Hua.It is very high and steep.We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six
to get to the summit. beautiful scenery it was！ could see many mountains and rivers in
distance.In the
night we
stayed in a cave hotel.I couldn’t go to
because the wind was blowing heavily.I
afraid the mountain would break down.The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise
the east.The sun was very big and red.How
we were!
短文改错(二)
A
(2024·大庆质量检测二)Tina and I had been good friend for years.We often did things together，so one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself.I don’t know what was wrong.I thought about what I had done and said recent.Was Tina upset because I had done well in the history test than her？No，she was happy that I did well in school.I decided find out what was the matter.I walked over to there Tina was sitting.“Tina，”I said softly，“Is anything wrong？”He answered sadly，“Yes，my cat died on last night.”I finally knew the reason what she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.
答案：
Tina and I had been good
for years.We often did things together， one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself.I
know what was wrong.I thought about what I had done and said .Was Tina upset because I had done
in the history test than her？No，she was happy that I did well in school.I decided find out what was the matter.I walked over to
Tina was sitting.“Tina，”I said softly，“Is anything wrong？” answered sadly，“Yes，my cat died
last night.”I finally knew the reason
she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.
B
来源：www.ziyuanku.com(2024·吉林通化统一考试)Television plays important part in our life. It shows us program, like the news and sports events.
We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games.
Television was
being developed over 80
years,
influenced our life ever since.
答案：
Television plays
important part in our life. It shows us ， like the news and sports events.
We can watch films, listen to interviews and
the sounds of events that
far away. Television
us about countries and cultures
we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for
things as well. You can record shows and films for
viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games.
Television was
developed over 80
years， our life ever since.
C
(2024·长春质量预测)
Dear Mandy，
I’m not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in
maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to
university.He thinks I’m lazy，but it’s not true.I work really hard，often study late into the night！I’ve tried to talk to my
mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my
brother does.My brother doesn’t study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades.It’s not fair!
The only thing I like it is art.My teacher says I’m the best
student she’s had for year.When I told my dad, all he said
was, “You mustn’t waste your time in art.You must focus your
mind on your lessons ！” I’m feeling quite puzzling about what to
do now.Would you please help me out?
