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假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修
课(elective course),请介绍必修课 Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说
明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course
Elective Course
Subject
Travel of science
⚫ introducing
scientists and
inventions
Subject
Photography
⚫ taking photos
Gardening
⚫ growing
flowers
Teacher
a professor
Teacher
a young reporter
4:00 p.m.-4:45
p.m.
School’s garden
Time &
Place
⚫ 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.
⚫ school hall
Time &
Place
⚫ 4:00 p.m.-4:45
p.m.
⚫ City Park
An old gardener
Tip
take notebooks and
pens
Tip
Take cameras
tools offered by
school
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3. 文章不少于 90 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。_______________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使
用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。
内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程 Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。
这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。
其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。
【参考范文】
Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is arequired course.
We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting.
The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.
So you mustnt miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall.
Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points.
There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening.
I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos.
I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.
So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.
I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从
两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了
自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙
述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使
用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到
了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增
强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their
inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、
Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、
The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、
So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、
I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
（三）
"你养我长大，我陪你变老．
"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文．
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；
（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）．
注意事项：
（1）词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in
the process of my growth. __
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【参考范文】
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life.
You are important persons in the process of my growth．
You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长）
When I have problems with my study and life，
you are always patient enough to help
me and encourage me．
【高分句型一】
In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，
you always work hard from morning till night．
（努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）
Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．
You are ready to help people in need．
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．
【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）
Dad and mum，today Ill cook dinner for you．
Ill go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and
encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．
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